Oct 10, 2008

The Sinners

"Honey, this is not good, this is diabolic." she said.

"Chill love, no one will know." he comforted her.

"Yes, but it is still... so wrong."

"Only if we get caught."

She smiled.

"You sure we won't get caught?"

"As sure as I was yesterday."

"You are one horny bugger."

"And what about you?"

She laughed shyly and slithered down his body somewhere in the darkness below.

He gasped as a knock on the wall startled him.

Yes, he managed to squeak out.

A voice followed.

"Father, I have a confession to make…"
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The confession booths [?] are so comfy and cozy. There have been some interesting comments on some of the past stories. There are the questions that I feel need answering in a proper manner, so there will be a post after Sunday's story, where I will try to answer all these questions/comments the best or the worst I can. Thanks for the comments everyone, I really look forward to your feedback, to take names, Sakshi, Jadis, Queen Bean, Kris, Kartik, Impressionist, AJ and everyone else who read but are too lazy to leave a comment :)

Thanks!


17 comments:

  1. Ermm..the teaser after the story yesterday gave me unrealistically high expectations for this one.
    Ahem. Whatever.
    Not bad.
    S.

    And thanks for mentioning me there! ;)
    S.

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  2. Ohhh! One of the comments you've been waiting for :D

    LOL! I loved it. I identify with it somewhere, have had my fair share of confessional moments! :P

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  3. heh heh. very V for Vendetta-ish. loved it!!

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  4. Yeah, i too expected something topping 'em all.
    Not quite a story.....

    Alright

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  5. so what did they say?
    'forgive me father for I have fucked!?' :D lol

    -I

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  6. Sakshi...hey expectations are the first step towards failure. You deserved a mention :)

    QB...humm, heck I gotta go to one of these confession boxes to feel cozy :P

    N

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  7. Jadis...more like H for Horni-sh :)

    MonkE...sometimes, heck, most of the times, it is not a story :) its an experience, an incident, an accident, and that is a story in itself. Ah, wow.

    :D

    N

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  8. Jevvs...arre nahi yaar, someone else knocked from the other side of the confession box while the Father and his babe were getting naughty :P he he, there I go explaining the whole story in most bland manner!

    Thanks Jeev!

    N

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  9. LOL, awesome. Now I wanna try this :D

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  10. haha....good one.....back to the blog after quite sm time....and yeah a reward....!!!!!

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  11. sinning in the confessional...convenient if you wanna be forgiven after :D

    oh and thanks for the mention. you link to my blog and i'll link to yours...deal???

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  12. Ah ha! I liked this much more than the Angel. Nice nice nice!

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  13. Something I read today on similar lines..

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    A priest offered a Nun a lift.
    She got in and crossed her legs, forcing her gown to reveal a leg.

    The priest nearly had an accident.

    After controlling the car, he stealthily slid his hand up her leg.

    The nun said, 'Father, remember Psalm 129?'

    The priest removed his hand. But, changing gears, he let his hand slide up her leg again.

    The nun once again said, 'Father, remember Psalm 129?'

    The priest apologized 'Sorry sister but the flesh is weak.'

    Arriving at the convent, the nun sighed heavily and went on her way.

    On his arrival at the church, the priest rushed to look up Psalm 129. It said, 'Go forth and seek, further up, you will find glory.'
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  14. Heh. Good one. :P
    And winnie the poohi's quote. :P

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  15. Haw. You're writing about the sexo :O

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