A tentacled figure rose out of the fog, and hovered silently over the boat. It observed the entangled couple with the interest a child shows in a new game.
The girl opened her eyes mid-kiss, noticed the floating tentacles and leapt off the boy with a startled yelp. The boy looked around confused at the green mist that was now covering half their boat and tried to calm the girl, but his own rising panic was enough to send the girl into a crying fit of hysteria.
"YOU!" thundered the green tentacled figure and pointed at the girl. The girl stopped crying at once, her tears choked back by the fear of the unknown.
"It's bad manners," the floating form said, "to open your eyes when kissing."
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Really bad manners.
Oh yeah.
ReplyDeleteI've understood that too.
Good one.
LMAO. Hell yes it sure is!
ReplyDelete:D
Is it?? hmm..
ReplyDeletenice one!!! i was expecting a completely different ending...some whacked out alien shit or something...oh wait, wasn't that what it was???
ReplyDelete@umangexuberance: yes it is...completely and absolutely. to humans and all other intelligent forms of life that have closeable eyelids :D
lol. nice one!
ReplyDeleteLOL!!!
ReplyDeleteha ha ha sumtimes its ok i think not to close ur eyes.;)
ReplyDeletelol...
ReplyDeletethat was fun...
Monk-E...
ReplyDeletebetter you did, cuz it won't be nice if someone had to explain ;)
Jadis...
Eyes are good open for whatever follows a good kissing sessnion ;)
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Nowafter... LoL back to you.
ReplyDeletePriya... Same same :P
ha ha ha. LOL.
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Anon...
ReplyDeleteI guess you'll have to give me a practical ;) and lots more.
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Now this. Was. Good. Seriously.
ReplyDeleteI've always liked the way you end your stories... this one here made me grin insanely. xD
Wicked.
PS: It isn't always bad manners, though... xP
LD...
ReplyDeleteI like those always kind of circumstances ;)
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LMAO! :D
ReplyDeletelol...
ReplyDeletenow this is what i call a story...
but now you got me thinking..
I GOT BAD MANNERS