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Jul 8, 2009

The Wink-- Short Short Story

Words swirled in his head like rain water swirling down a drain and his fingers danced on the screen of his phone as he walked and typed. World around him was just a blur, a blur which had no meaning, a blur which was merely a distraction at best, a blur of which he didn't want to belong to.

The music in his head turned to steady flow of noise as the voices got louder and he typed faster and faster about sleeping princesses who dreamt of data, about dragons who owned corporation, about love lost in feverish lust and gained in a hale of anger, about understanding and hate. He wrote about what life and love mean to a dying man.

He wrote all that and more as he walked

He walked through the crowds towards his destination. He saved the file on his phone and put the phone in a passing woman's carelessly open bag. He saw Death, revving her bike, on the other side of the road. He walked forth to ride with her.

He saw Death smile and wink at him.

And even though his dead body was dragged under a car for 20 meters, he was already riding into another world, his arms tightly clasped around the tiny waist of Death.
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Of course, I could have used Pratchett's version of Death but I always feel Gaiman's version of Death is sexier. If you can't make head or tail of the last sentence, you need to catch up on a LOT of reading.

15 got high and tried to fly:

harshad said...

love it man! and yeah Gaiman's version of Death is way sexier...and i can imagine her revving a bike. Nicely written bro.

hw u doin?

Jadis said...

Gaiman's DEATH for the win!!! Anyday! :D This was awesome!

Nothingman said...

@Harshad...wow, blast from the past dude! I'm fine, how have you been!

@Jadis...ofcourse, Gaiman's Death is sexy, but Pratchett's Death takes the cake! :D

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Rashi said...

Death narration...So well done !

The Island Girl: said...

mere type ki post:)

SAHITYIKA said...

nice post..
bt still i need to read alot.. :D

AD said...

absolutely WOW!

this makes me wanna come back here :)

Nothingman said...

Rashi...

Thanks :) We like to talk about Death here ;)

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Nothingman said...

Island Girl...

Duh, I typed it.

;)

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Nothingman said...

Sahityika...

If you mean you want longer stories, well, then, wait ;)

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Nothingman said...

AD...

What? you mean you weren't planning to come back?

LOL.

Do come back, we are the funny peoples :P

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Sia said...

That was a short short story. Awwww. I want more!

Stupidosaur said...

...sleeping princesses who dreamt of data, about dragons who owned corporation, about love lost in feverish lust and gained in a hale of anger, about understanding and hate...

That was a nice line.

But apart from that, its basically

*Nothingman story begins*
There are a one or more characters.
They are a bit looney/love gore/kill/get killed
*Nothingman story ends*

Nothingman said...

Sia...

Be careful what you wish for, you might get it ;)

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Nothingman said...

Stupidosaur...

Yeah, 'basically'. So?

:)

N

 
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